In Search of My Dream Land
In search of my new land of dreams,
I set my sails open in seven seas.
Drawing in the tangy taste of air,
I hold my wheel of fortune with pride.
While the vastness and depths continue to surprise,
Anxiety starts slipping by.
What if’s and When? start to brood over,
As violent storm approaches near.
Voluminous tides sweep and throw me away,
Suffocated and tired I fall apart.
No more controlling the Wheel of fate,
Once I thought was under my name.
Lost and directionless in vast blue scape,
I try to find where i stand.
Slowly and eventually Sun shines and confusion subsides,
As I find compass of determination inside.
really nice work....
ReplyDeletea great start... keep it up :)
jut wow!! pc u rocks... :)
ReplyDelete@namit and neha......thanku so much both of u...:)
ReplyDeletefinding a way...beautiful :)
ReplyDeletenice kick start madam
finally u did a great thing by doing this!!
ReplyDeleteluv d poem :)
the way u compared ur life to a sea voyage...very imaginative n surreal! kick start:)
ReplyDeletegud one sweety ... love the flow of the ideas
ReplyDeleteoye hoye perfect start pc! keep going!!
ReplyDeletebtw see the pic, sun is shining!
Good Luck ;-)
@sarthak n aditi....thanks...keep following...:)
ReplyDelete@rosh....glad u noticed that...thr was a reason y i used sea voyage in comparison to life ( every direction looks almost same n it is so easy to get lost in thr)....with that even the wheel denotes control of fate
ReplyDelete@prachee di ..... thanku di ...keep following :)
ReplyDelete@mohit...yup sun is shining...hehe...thanks n keep following...:)
awesum.......u can be gud writer......:) :)
ReplyDelete@shubhang...thanku :)
ReplyDeletedeep,imaginative n mature writing....in short a gr8 piece of wrk...
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ReplyDeletesai hai...
ReplyDeletenice work and presentation, keep it up
god bless you :)
Great Imagination and choice of words! \m/
ReplyDelete@siddharth Priyank and Palash .. Thanku...u people keep me going...:)
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